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Editing Sometimes Ignores Feelings

posted Mar 25, 2019, 7:22 AM by Ben Kreucher

There's nothing like the feeling of holding your freshly printed manuscript in your hands. Usually. The first time I printed out a manuscript to line edit, I felt a sense of purpose and achievement. This most recent time, however, when I look down at the papers I just want to toss them into a fire. Not because they're bad. They might even be objectively better than that first manuscript I printed and gave to beta readers who later said they loved it. It might not be. But I don't believe that it's so much worse that it belongs buried in a drawer.

It's just easy to get caught up in the idea that there's always more work to do. Really, I just want to give this work one final polish before sending it out to give it its best chance at finding a home with an agent and publisher. Yet, there's still that feeling that this work belongs in the trash.

It's odd. I want to edit it and polish it, but I'm easily distracted from doing the work. Something always seems to come up: a spring training baseball game on TV, a new video game to play or a favorite old one, a movie to watch, a nap to take, etc. Instead of just buckling down and doing the work.

Or, when I do the work, I find myself relaxing early. For example, "Oh, it's only one o'clock and I've already read and edited X chapters. My goal was X. Guess I'm done." Instead of continuing to work until five and reading Y chapters, I'll stop after hitting X. Nothing inherently wrong with that. There is such a thing as mental fatigue, especially when editing. And I do prefer to have a sharp mind when combing through a manuscript, but the longer it takes to edit, the longer I'll have to wait to send it out and the longer it'll take to hear back. And, let's be honest, it's already a long process.

But, in the end, I'd rather not rush it. I'd rather send out the best version of the manuscript I can so it'll find the home it deserves. Yours. That's the ultimate goal.

Writing Hope

posted Feb 19, 2019, 6:01 AM by Ben Kreucher

There's a new literary movement beginning. Well, not new, just newly named. Hopepunk. It's a response to the current state of the world. And a direct opposite of the popular grimdark and dystopia. Though hopepunk can take place in any setting, it's defined by the protagonist's stubborn refusal to give up on hope.

It's basically Star Wars

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Though not everyone is a fan. But I am. I like infusing stories and characters with hope with the will to keep going despite long odds and difficult circumstances because that's what life is: a struggle to keep moving forward despite the crushing weight of negative forces that want to keep you in despair.

We all need hope. We all need love. We all need faith. The more stories that build those themes up, the stronger we will become. We can resist the darkness together. Books, movies, TV shows, and games are just one small way to help bring hope into a sometimes dark world.

Good stories and good writing will always rise to the top. No matter the theme. Let's bring more together and brighten our world with our light.

So Far, So Great

posted Jan 27, 2019, 6:18 AM by Ben Kreucher

I like to let the new year marinate a bit before deciding whether or not to give up on it. I figure I might as well give it a chance. So far, 2019 has been pretty good. I've spent a lot of time going over critiques and feedback of my latest edit and taken time to let that advice and those thoughts and ideas bounce around and sink in. Also, I've gotten back into reading after a long few months of writing and editing.

Sometimes, I get a singular focus and seem intent and able to do one thing at a time. All my spare time goes into editing, for example. Other times, I can multitask, writing and reading (not at the same time) during my free time in a given day.

Often in the new year, we make resolutions that we break after a few months, this year, I just wanted to take some time to really evaluate my writing and style, polish my skills and manuscript, and gather new ideas and flesh out old ones. Not really a resolution, rather not a new one, more like a continuation of my writing process. Without growth, I'd stagnate and that's no fun to read about. Or smell.

So, I'm hopeful that 2019 will continue to be great and I'll gain wonderful experience, advice, and continue striving toward achieving my writing goals.

The Origin of an Idea--Erie Tales

posted Dec 2, 2018, 5:56 AM by Ben Kreucher

The current project I'm working on blossomed from an idea...like all stories do. The idea began as I thought about the subject of Chosen Ones. I knew I didn't want to write that story arc, not because it's been done well so many times, but because I wanted to explore a different angle of it. I wasn't sure that I wanted to subvert it, like the 5 books mentioned on the Tor/Forge blog

The basic premise I began with was "what if Harry Potter met Draco Malfoy first, instead of Ron Weasley". From their ideas blossomed and the subject of my focus changed. As the idea matured and generated new ideas and new story lines, I began to realize that what I was writing was actually a "what if Harry Potter's son joined Voldemort". Which, I suppose, some might say isn't too far off the plot of Harry Potter and the Cursed Child.

It just seemed interesting. You have this character who's grown up hearing about the deeds of their famous parent and living in the shadow of them. Maybe they want to live up to the hype or surpass that greatness. All they know is that they don't want to be overshadowed by their parent's legacy.

That's where Ted began. He fell into this trap of thinking how he'd become greater than his famous father who succeeded in fulfilling prophesy, defeating a relentless enemy, and saving the world by ending a centuries long war. Ted loves his father, but everywhere he goes, he hears about how "Merlin's heir is so great"; he begins to wonder if his whole life will be lived in the shadows of his father. When the opportunity to strike out on his own and forge his own legacy emerges, he jumps at it without fully considering the consequences until too late.

A Time To Edit

posted Sep 25, 2018, 9:46 AM by Ben Kreucher

A lot's happened over the summer. It was hot. I went to the lake. I worked hard. I read a lot. I wrote some, too. Now that it's autumn, though, it's time to buckle down. There's something relaxing about curling beneath a blanket on a cool fall day and editing. It seems to be my most productive time of the year... to edit. Maybe because all the rain keeps me indoors.

The nice thing about autumn is that soon the leaves will change color. Also, there's football to watch. Or at least have on in the background on mute while I edit (depends if anyone else is home).

A nice, warm cider in one hand and a good book in the other is a great way to spend the day. Whether reading or editing or just staring at pages wondering what color to add next to the shapes and lines on the page that form an image.

Sure, the rain and put people in a bit of a melancholy, esp. when that rain falls on a Monday or for a few days in a row, but eventually the rain stops (or turns to snow).

So, until next time, I'll just keep editing away and polish this manuscript until it shines or my fingers bleed.

A Long Delay

posted Jul 12, 2018, 7:51 AM by Ben Kreucher   [ updated Jul 12, 2018, 8:04 AM ]

I know it's been a minute since I last posted anything. Sorry about that. I've been caught up reading, editing, writing, and researching. Turns out, it's easy to get lost researching ideas and world building (there are too many articles on Wikipedia to peruse and too many interesting things on Pinterest to gaze upon). And editing can really take it out of a guy. It's not just the work of going back over your writing line by line, but waiting for others to read and revise and criticize and suggest; it's also, the harsh reality of pouring over a story you love and trying to view it for the first time.

Editing is time consuming, sometimes tedious, but 100% necessary for that excellent, ready to publish book you're dying to write and readers are longing to finish...putting off work, school, friends, family, and sleeping, reading while eating simply to get to the next page and dive deeper into the story. 

That's what every author wants for their readers.

Not easy, but totally worth it.

And, if you're curious what I'm currently reading, it's the Night Angel trilogy by Brent Weeks. I bought it as an omnibus from Barnes & Noble.

To Start a Plot, Start Walking

posted May 8, 2018, 12:34 PM by Ben Kreucher

The plot of a book is a lot like taking a walk. As you start out, you might know where you're going and how to get there, but you don't know what you'll see along the way. A good plot gives you clues to your destination, some even point you toward it. It seems to take forever to arrive where you're going. But the way back home takes almost no time at all. Even though it's the same distance. For some reason, I like to walk home rather than walk toward some destination.

Even walking around the block seems to take longer until I reach the halfway point. Then, it's easier, I walk faster, and soon I'm home. It hardly feels like the same distance. 

Plots are the same. For me, I know where I want my characters to go, I start them in the right direction and they know how to get there. But once they reach it, the story is mostly over and going home, the wrap-up, flies by. Loose ends are tied up, some questions might be left unanswered, but nothing glaring or major. And the journey home, though it might be the same distance, feels shorter.

Along the way, as I walk, I notice things. A permanent marker discarded along the side of the road. A frog carcass baking in the heat. Where the sidewalk ends on one side of the street and if it begins on the other...even if there's no crosswalk or discernible reason why. Standing water. Stagnant drains. Construction. Houses for sale. How heavy the traffic is. 

As my characters journey, I notice things too. Where they stop for meals or rest. What signs, omens, or portents distract them. What adventures and quests meet them along the way. And I learn more about my characters, what they like, how they react to different stimuli, why they make a certain choice, etc.

Writing, like life, is a journey. The destination may be to reach "The End", but don't lose sight of the things around you while walking toward that distant goal. Take time to explore, especially in the first draft or two. You never know what you might find. You can always cut later. That's why writers edit.

Character Descriptions

posted Mar 19, 2018, 2:27 PM by Ben Kreucher

So, I've gone through a few character descriptions, so by now you're probably able to write something like:
She's smart, kind, enthusiastic, and generous. She gives great advice and doesn't judge. She listens without forming a response. She's beautiful and strong, inside and out. She's passionate and compassionate, but fierce like a mother bear, especially about her dog. She opens up to people slowly because she's been burned before. But she's more loyal than most. She's driven to be the best in all she does. Yet outshines everyone. They either try to catch up or give up as she laps them. But sometimes takes on too much to appear more competent. She wants to crash through her limits instead of working to expand them gradually. She's constantly learning, improving, and bettering herself. She knows she's not a prize to be won. She demands respect and attention, but if she doesn't get it, she seeks it until she does. And occasionally, that quest consumes her thoughts. Instead of confronting problems head-on and making waves, she avoids until she has to admit a mistake. She's nerdy and witty. Charming and polite. Honest. She doesn't always ask for help when she needs it, but she's working on it. She's competitive and works to improve herself constantly. She's not as confident as she could be because she doesn't see how amazing she is.

Okay, but now that you've got a character, how do you describe her? Green eyes, brown hair, average height, slim. That's boring. Why not have another character compliment her? Something like: "There are times when you literally take my breath away, then you put on makeup and there are no words." doesn't really work. Even if it's a great line for a Valentine's Day card.

This: "She had a kissably cute nose that perfectly fit her face. Elegant and graceful. Like a swan sleeping on a pristine, glass-smooth lake. The orange red glow of sunrise just peeking above the dark olive green trees." might be purple prose. But, again, would work for Valentine's Day.

Maybe: "Her chin daintily pulls away in an adorable, yet heartbreaking way, like it's afraid to be touched because it's been hurt before. Yet, it still braves the attempt." It's okay, still a bit much...

I suppose it just depends what sort of relationship you want the character describing her to have with her. If he wants to win her heart, those would definitely fit. If he wants to boost her self-confidence, they might help. Might not, if she doesn't believe him. If he's just her best friend, she might like it or she might find it weird. Hey, it's your story, get creative and see what happens.

"I could get lost in her eyes. Like olive forests teeming with untold adventures. Mirth captured in an instant. The searing heat of anger that cuts sharper than any knife. Yet I'd brave that fire for a glance my way." Definitely use that on Valentine's Day.

...Unless she has brown eyes. 

You could try, "Have you ever gotten lost in someone's eyes and felt like you were drowning? You resurfaced after days, gasping for breath, but it's only been a few seconds. That's why I can't look at her."

New Year, New Character Sketch

posted Jan 10, 2018, 2:41 PM by Ben Kreucher

Oh wow, it's been a while. I guess the holidays really caught up with me. I've been busy typing away on another story. Pounding the keyboard into submission while writing and editing. Trying to hone my ideas into a rough shape, a great plot, fun characters, and surprising twists.
Well, it's a new year so I'll continue something old and write another character sketch. 

She's a broken woman with neglect and abuse in her past. Having been in a controlling relationship once, she never wants to repeat it. She hides behind a facade of self-confidence; hoping to fake it long enough to actually find it. Except, it isn't a mask. If she ever realized it, she'd be truly powerful. Breathtaking, she comes by her charm naturally and has an unabashed love for all things nerd.
Still, she flirts, seeking attention from anyone and everyone. Yet, when she hooks someone, she doesn't know what to do. All too aware that last time she allowed affection close, it bit her. So, she teases and manipulates, hoping to find power and worth in the misery of others. For, sadly, it's true that misery loves company and if she can make someone feel worse than she feels, she can gain some semblance of power.

What do you think? Have you met someone like her? Would you want to? How would you react if you did? How would your favorite characters? Can you see a story forming around her?

Character Sketching 101

posted Oct 15, 2017, 7:07 PM by Ben Kreucher   [ updated Oct 15, 2017, 7:24 PM ]

Character sketches are a great way to get to know a character you're writing about. From the protagonist to the antagonist, from the love interest to the comedic relief, some people would advise writers to sketch out all their characters, major and minor. But how?

There are a plethora of forms online to find and fill out.

Personally, I don't really do them. I like to let the characters blossom on the page as I write them. I suppose that makes me a pantser in that regard (I also don't really outline. Just briefly or as I go to keep track of events). But plotting has its place too, don't get me wrong. Knowing how a story will develop is just as crucial as understanding how a character will react in a given situation. After all, if you're putting them in trouble, you should know how they'll get out...or at least how they'd act under stress, under pressure, when things are going smooth, and when they're bored.

Sometimes, you can even take inspiration from the people in your own life. Perhaps take a deep, long look at one person and write what you see. It takes an authenticity of friendship, bravery to really delve into a person, and time invested, but it won't be a waste. Or, you could mash two or three or more friends together to create a composite character that expresses the best and worst of some of them. Either approach is good. One just makes a better birthday present. I think everyone likes to been seen, not just noticed.

People are more than hair color, skin color, eye color, height, weight, age, and gender.

You never really know what you know or don't know about a person or a character until you write it down. Just let it flow out. Give yourself free rein. Write as if no one will ever see it.

For example:
A quiet sadness lingers just below the surface, yet it's tempered by grit: a determination to do better to be stronger than the day before. That's not masquerading as false bravado; that's the only kind of strength we're ever given. Yet, not many people realize it. There's laughter in her smile and it dances in her eyes. There's a joy bubbling deep that longs to burst forth yet remains contained and controlled for the proper moments. A prim and proper lady to her core, she has impeccable manners. Soft-spoken, but not a doormat. Calm and even tempered, but a fierce friend and defender of her children. She has an understanding of worry and what a mother can bring from her own experiences and her own mother. She longs to love someone and the waiting frustrates her, but she doesn't want to just dive into anything or anyone. It's not that circumstances need to be perfectly aligned before she moves, rather, she knows her worth and isn't willing to settle for anything less than spectacular. Smart and kind, she isn't into a lot of nerdy things but she's quick to laugh, quicker to compliment, and rarely sarcastic. 

Is that a character you'd like to meet? Can you see a story forming around her? Do you know how she'd react if she fell into a pit of snakes? What if someone threw her into one? What else do you need or want to know before starting? Can you guess her favorite holiday?

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